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Setting the Mood: Candlelight

Candles have been with us for thousands of years and though they’re no longer a main source of light in the household, they’ll remain with us a while longer in forms such as decorative or emergency lighting. For this reason they’re common among many time periods and settings, giving authors a lot to play with when it comes to using this humble little device.

The mood and atmosphere that candles can add to a setting is delightfully varied. Depending on the amount of light they give, how many there are, the character’s state of mind, what they leave on their surroundings(such as soot), even the smell they give off, they can range from being soothing and cozy to enhancing a scene’s already-apparent creep factor.

Take scented candles for example. Usually pretty innocuous as long as it’s a scent you don’t hate, but what if the scent is being used to mask something horrible? Your character’s perception of the scent changes as they gain more awareness of the true nature of the scene, and what started as a pleasant smell can become overwhelming, stifling, even nauseating. And if it’s a scent that the character hates or is even allergic to, scented candles are unpleasant right off the bat and then get worse as more environmental details become apparent to them.

The amount of light produced is another angle to look at. A candle that’s bright enough to give light to the whole room will have a more positive effect than one so dim as to allow deep shadows to linger and creep around the edge of the light. Again context is an important factor, as well as the size of the room that the candle is illuminating—a small room will find itself comfortably lit while a large one will have corners and walls lost in shadow. In a positive context a single candle in a large room can still be comforting though, acting as a pool of light where a character can while away the hours with reading or contemplation.

Words for Describing it

Neutral

Sources

  • Candle
  • Candelabra
  • Flame
  • Scented candle
  • Taper
  • Tealight
  • Wick

Nouns

  • Glow
  • Illumination
  • Light

Adjectives

  • Gold
  • Golden
  • Orange
  • Pungent (smell, if scented)
  • Slight
  • Strong
  • Yellow

Verbs

  • Color
  • Flare
  • Flicker
  • Glow
  • Illuminate
  • Light
  • Smoke (if tallow or recently snuffed out)

Positive

Adjectives

  • Comforting
  • Cozy
  • Gentle
  • Pleasant
  • Soft
  • Soothing
  • Steady
  • Sweet (smell, if scented)
  • Warm

Verbs

  • Bathe
  • Brighten
  • Envelop

Negative

Nouns

  • Stench (smell, if scented or tallow)

Adjectives

  • Ailing
  • Dim
  • Diminutive
  • Dingy
  • Dirty
  • Feeble
  • Frail
  • Greasy (if tallow)
  • Grubby
  • Minuscule
  • Nauseating (smell, if scented or tallow)
  • Overpowering (smell, if scented or tallow)
  • Sickly
  • Weak

Verbs

  • Gutter
  • Die
  • Reek (smell, if scented or tallow)
  • Struggle
  • Suffocate (smell, if scented or tallow)

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Natural Wonders: The 22° Halo

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At a Glance

A halo can add a little mystery and beauty to the scene, or it can be an eerie and foreboding omen for the superstitious. The sky is dim with a filter of high clouds, and your character looks up to find that a thin band of light has graced the sun or moon.

How It Works

The 22° or circular halo is an optical phenomenon that causes a ring of light to appear around the sun or moon, with the sky inside the halo appearing to be darker than the sky outside of it. This ring can be white, or prismatic in color with the inner edge showing red and then progressing to blue toward the outer edge. Like diamond dust, it is caused by hexagonal ice crystals—this time high in the atmosphere instead of at ground level—reflecting and refracting sunlight or moonlight. Said ice crystals can be suspended in the atmosphere, or they can be from cirrus or cirrostratus clouds.

Before we continue, a quick note on the degrees deal you’ve been seeing. Angular distance is used to measure distances between objects in the sky and the size of said objects. The 22° in the 22° halo refers to the halo’s size—a little smaller than the width of an outstretched hand held at arm’s length—while degrees mentioned with regards to the position of the sun or moon refer to where they are in their arc. Zenith position is 90° and the horizon is 0°, with the halfway point between the two being 45°.

A circumscribed halo
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At times the 22° halo will appear with a circumscribed halo surrounding it, which can give it the appearance of an enormous eye. On top of just straight-up looking uncanny(and beautiful), this kind of halo has some fun fantasy possibilities, such as being a representation for the eye of a god or some other cosmic entity.

It’s important to note, however, that a circumscribed halo will only have an eye-like appearance along certain portions of the sun or moon’s arc. When nearing the zenith position(starting around an elevation of 70°), the circumscribed halo will become a circle and merge with the 22° halo, intensifying its color. It is between 70° and 50° that it maintains an oval shape and the eye-like appearance is apparent on its own, while sufficiently tall objects such as forests, mountains, or buildings are needed to cover the drooping lobes of the circumscribed halo between 50° and 32° in order to maintain the illusion of an eye. Below 32° the circumscribed halo will split into upper and lower tangent arcs. This site provides a simulator that gives a good visual of what the circumscribed halo looks like along the sun or moon’s arc.

Another companion to the 22° halo is the sun dog, where a pair of false suns appear on either side of the sun along the halo’s edge. This display is most easily visible when the sun is near the horizon and it can occur anywhere in the world and during any season.

Sun dog with a faint 22° halo, a sun pillar, and a parahelic arc
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Yet another potential accompaniment to the 22° halo is the light pillar, pictured above along with the sun dog and parahelic arc. While light pillar is the general name for this phenomenon, it is specifically called a sun pillar or solar pillar when it has the sun as its light source.

Words for Describing It

Neutral

Nouns

  • Halo
  • Inner edge (sharp and distinct, with a red color to it)
  • Moon ring
  • Nimbus
  • Outer edge (blue-tinged, fading)
  • Ring
  • Sun dog
  • Winter halo (if the moon is the light source)

Adjectives

  • Multicolored
  • Pale
  • Prismatic
  • Rainbow
  • Slender
  • Slight
  • Slim
  • Thin
  • White

Verbs

  • Drift
  • Encircle
  • Flare (sun dog)
  • Float
  • Gaze (with circumscribed halo)
  • Hang
  • Hover
  • Reflect
  • Refract
  • Shimmer
  • Shine
  • Watch (with circumscribed halo)

Interactions

  • Clouds (low clouds can obscure parts of the halo or the light source)
  • Light source
    • Sun
    • Moon

Metaphor

  • Eye (with circumscribed halo)

Example

“High clouds rolled in, creating a faint halo around the sun.”

Positive

Nouns

  • Crown
  • Promise

Adjectives

  • Beautiful
  • Brilliant
  • Dainty
  • Dazzling
  • Delicate
  • Fine
  • Flawless
  • Gleam (sun dog)
  • Opalescent
  • Opaline
  • Perfect
  • Radiant
  • Vibrant

Verbs

  • Blaze (sun dog)
  • Gleam
  • Grace
  • Promise

Example

“A halo crowned the sun as it climbed to its zenith, its prismatic ring shining against the pale sky behind it.”

Negative

Nouns

  • Omen
  • Portent
  • Warning

Adjectives

  • Apathetic
  • Baleful
  • Cold
  • Dim
  • Dispassionate
  • Fragile
  • Ghostly
  • Hollow
  • Illusory
  • Impassive
  • Indifferent
  • Phantom
  • Spectral
  • Uncanny
  • Unearthly
  • Unfeeling
  • Washed-out

Verbs

  • Foretell
  • Glare (with circumscribed halo)
  • Glower (with circumscribed halo)
  • Judge
  • Loom

Example

“An enormous eye loomed behind the eastern peak, with the moon as its stark, staring pupil. It watched, cold and indifferent, as they made their way through the darkened valley.”

Associated Phenomena

  • 46° halo
  • Circumhorizontal arc
  • Circumzenithal arc
  • Cirrostratus clouds
  • Cirrus clouds
  • Diamond dust
  • Light pillars
  • Parahelic circle
  • Sun dogs
  • Supralateral arc
  • Upper tangent arc

I highly recommend that you do some research on halos yourself, as there are some absolutely incredible photos and footage to see of this phenomenon. And as you’re going about your business outside, maybe keep an eye out when there are high clouds overhead.

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Natural Wonders: Diamond Dust

At a Glance

If you want to add a little magic to a snowy winter scene, fantasy or no, diamond dust might be what you want to go for. Your characters look up to find that diamond dust sparkles in the clear air around them, bringing another element of beauty to the snowy landscape.

How It Works

Diamond dust is, at the most basic level of description, a ground-level cloud of ice crystals. These ice crystals form slowly and are simple in structure, either forming as hexagonal plates or columns. This is what gives diamond dust its reflective properties.

The formation of diamond dust relies on temperature and water vapor. It can form anywhere the temperature is in the range of -10 °C(14 °F) to -39 °C(38 °F), with Antarctica sporting the phenomenon almost year-round. The second element required, water vapor, comes from a warmer moisture-bearing mass of air moving over the cold ground-level air. Ice crystals form as these two masses of air interact and then fall to the ground as diamond dust. Since clouds are not required for the formation of diamond dust, it tends to appear under clear skies. Diamond dust is distinct from ice fog, and doesn’t tend to impede visibility.

The crystal types that make up diamond dust are also associated with optical phenomena such as halos, light pillars, and dun dogs.

Words for Describing It

Neutral

Nouns

  • Diamond dust
  • Facets
  • Flecks
  • Ice-crystal haze
  • Ice crystals

Adjectives

  • Brief
  • Cold
  • Fleeting
  • Minute
  • Pale
  • Silver
  • Thin
  • Tiny

Verbs

  • Blink
  • Drift
  • Flash
  • Float
  • Glint
  • Reflect
  • Refract
  • Shine
  • Sift
  • Wink

Interactions

  • Air currents
  • Light source
  • Solid objects

Example

    “Diamond dust sifted down from the clear sky above, reflecting the sun with tiny flashes of light.”

Positive

Adjectives

  • Brilliant
  • Ephemeral
  • Magical
  • Whimsical

Verbs

  • Dance
  • Glitter
  • Shimmer
  • Sparkle
  • Swirl
  • Twinkle

Metaphor

  • Fairy dust
  • Glitter
  • Stars
  • Stardust

Example

“Diamond dust danced and glittered in the clear air.”

Negative

It’s going to be a little difficult to make this phenomenon directly negative as far as I can see, but focusing on the bitter cold that is required for it or contrasting its beauty with something horrible going on in the scene could do it. An unnatural light source that they’re picking up could also work.

Adjectives

  • Frigid
  • Ghostly
  • Sharp
  • Steely

Verbs

  • Mock

Example

“The shadows glinted with the ghostly flashes of diamond dust, its presence revealed by the wretched red glow of eldritch flames.”

Associated Phenomena

  • Cirrostratus clouds
  • Halos
  • Light pillars
  • Sun dogs

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